The Backrooms

"mhm yeah I rember that"

"yeah ok I remember that too"

"man I think I'm just gonna have the same opinion I had of it when I gave crit"

"wow really that i-oh hey there's a bottom section, I remember being told about that"

"…"

"Yeah ok I see your game, take my upvote"

The workload is HORRIBLE and the quality is pretty good

I read a bit of this one whilst it was in drafts, so I already had some idea of where it was going. In general, I'm not a big fan of stories about immortals (too often it feels just like the same 5 ideas retreaded constantly), but there's more than enough juicy history here to make up for that. There's so much detail and random little stories that it genuinely does feel like walking through a museum.

The decision to only use 2 digits for the year in each recording is really clever in my opinion, because it leaves us wondering when the last transcript actually occurred. 2199? 2299? 3099? It's impossible to tell.

Overall, a great page. Not much I can critique for such a seasoned author.

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Wow! This was interesting to read, so the Backrooms existed thorough history? This is a great concept. I like how you made this place far, far away from the center heart of the Backrooms as briefly mentioned in the article. It's interesting to read about a place you can access only by specific connections, and routes. Another great thing is that you made this like a private museum type area where and immortal person lives.

It was rough in the beginning by some sentences and a bit rough on the stories, but it worked thorough the page. You explain in such detail, with emotion, body language and all that makes it understandable. Very nice to learn about history in the Backrooms.

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