+1
Unique concept that is handled quite effectively and realistically. The Midway is pretty briefly described, but it does its job. Good phenomenon!
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Thank you! I’ve never really made a successful article and I was worried this wouldn’t do well 😅. Thanks again!
JF (Spibsboft)
Spibsboft1,
No-clipping Gone Wild! also known as No!-clipping is one of my favorite things. The "agent James" in your dialogue seems off. I believe that "agent Bozzelli" would be more professional. A small price to pay.
If this is for the contest, please tag your entry with "phenomecon2023" and set the parent page to the contest page.
+1 for you.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
I’ll keep that in mind, thanks for your tips!
(Edit: I have no clue how to do the whole parent page thing 😅)
JF (Spibsboft)
to parent the page, you just go to the bottom options where the edit button is. it miiiight be under + Options though
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
Yes I found the button but I’m a little worried I might mess it up. My article already appears on the contest and other pages so I don’t really understand the whole parenting problem. Do I just write the title of the page (the Phenomecon page)?
JF (Spibsboft)
ive done it for u!!
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i think it is generally standard for the names of agents to be first names - the m.e.g. isn't that clinical, this isn't the scp foundation !!
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
Ha! No disrespect, but that would be like 007 radioing to HQ with "This is agent Jimmy reporting." I am basing my opinion on IRL experience. But heck, pay no attention to me. It took me a half dozen "edits" to get my point across.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
As my title says, I wish there was more here. The concepts introduced here are interesting and keep the attention of the reader for a pretty good amount of time.
There are some SPaG things that I would make sure to pay attention to (for instance using "derailing" as a way to describe derailing is unnecessary.
But, other than the SPaG things and the longing for more, it works just fine as is.
Would you be able to point out the SPaG mistakes, I guess I didn’t notice them but a couple people mentioned it 😅
JF (Spibsboft)
I really like this concept! Occasional SPaG errors, but nothing too serious.
CharaDotArchivist
The demon that comes when you call her name.
Thank you! I must’ve not noticed the SPaG errors, I’ll be sure to look for them whenever I have time.
JF (Spibsboft)
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