I've saved the form up till I got the ERROR message. Am I missing something?
That's as far as the form will "save" so once you've hit that, you've hit the end.
This makes a statement about data and the 'ambiguity' of whether certain phenomena are intentional, and that can be an interesting message.
That doesn't make this a fun page to read. It's too simple and lacks any substance or development. Imo you're just plainly telling readers to care about the meaning of the article without showing them why. It doesn't encourage me to care about it.
Perhaps the meaning of the page goes over my head, but if I'm honest, it comes across as a little condescending in a "you're a plebian who doesn't get it" fashion. And I don't… the page just doesn't feel like it puts in enough effort to convince me that I should.
I'm open to changing my mind if you'd explain what's going on exactly :/
Hope it's not too harsh, just wanted to be honest!
Keep hitting save until you hit an error, and then you've reached the end.
Author notes:
- "this doesn't make sense" yeah. yeah.
- "so what's actually going on with the phenomenon" who knows? hence why ♦ and ☽ are arguing over whether it's worth the time or not
- "is it actually a phenomenon or is it just random, unlucky chance" :)
- "are there actual dead victims of this phenomenon" :)
- "why aren't you answering any of these questions" :)
- "is this a 'come up with your own interpretation' page" yes :)
- "I don't like this" sorry lol
- "who are the weird shape names" I picked those shapes because I already have two faceless, descriptionless characters named DIAMOND and SICKLE that I've used in other pages. feel free to interpret ♦ and ☽ as them if you wish, but there's no real lore significance there
- "why is the page so wide on desktop" css magic (thank you
scutoid studios)
Party rockers jn the hou
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Im not on acid I swear its just 2:30 am and my beainr no want sleppy
Uaeugh uhm +1 simple and to the point but not bland the ending is kind of cool but I wish there was a bit more so you had a direction for how you choose to interpret it
GL on the contest :)
THE KIRAI SPONGEBOB ME BOY
GIRLY WHY'RE YOU OUT HERE CAUSING ME TO HAVE A LITERAL SPIT-TAKE
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
I really like the idea of this pag, yet I'm conflicted because the mystery isn't the most satisfying. My solution? Just solve the mystery. I am going to (with permission) write an interesting conclusion to this page because I love the idea to bits.
[rupaul voice] DON’T fuck it up
Jokes aside, you’re allowed to expand on stuff I write! I have a few things I’m particular about preserving but this phenomenon you’re absolutely allowed to expand on in any direction you want.
glad i showed you how to make the body width larger, hehe !!
i absolutely love the format of this page, super good :3
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
ghostchibi,
I have actually been impatiently waiting for this, to see where it would go.
Sounds like "Phenomenon 5 Meets Phenomenon 7."
Now I have to wait for the conclusion from RatifTheRatGod!
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
no idea what type of witch craft you did to make that but +1
does anyone see these forum signatures, also why does this have more space than the description
(not the author but whatever)
CSS my beloved…
CharaDotArchivist
The demon that comes when you call her name.
