The Backrooms

Teehee pretty forest with lots of flowers~! Yaaaay!!

the premise was good, but the buildup didn't really go anywhere. i would've preferred if all the details added up more into something. as of now, it feels more like a location then a story. -1

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moody ^-^

Could be decent but it doesnt really lead to much interesting stuff and sort of just fizzles out and is generally kinda mediocre.

I thought it adequate that there are ten exits but you said "only"…

It is what it is. Straying from the clinical tone would probably make this somewhat interesting, but the environment is still so simple. Also it lags my device for whatever reason.

I put a short description of the changes I made but I figured I'd also comment here to say that I updated the exits with Ferra's permission! Basically, since 37 is now a pool level and not a jungle level, it no longer made sense for 39's trees to lead into 37's trees, since 37 doesn't have any.

clinical tone ruins everything, huh

Not bad!

Though how can we claim the level is finite if we have not yet reached the true edge?