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But I don’t know how I feel about the big text.

definitely prefer this one over byte — while I felt that byte indulged too much in surrealist language to the detriment of expressing a difficult-to-communicate idea (which I view as the main appeal of surrealism, corruption of meaning through corruption of semiotics), I think this piece does a much better job just being an exercise in surrealist prose while also including a story at the end through the handwritten note and the introduction of our character's non-altered voice.

it really makes you wonder what the fuck happened in the forest (nothing good that's for sure) that would make Melanie so hurt mentally. who is "he", and does he have relation to the speaker in the surrealist section and the allusions to Christ-esque omniscience (particularly the parallelism between Jeremiah 1:5 and the 2nd/3rd paragraphs of the piece.) much better job with the second entry into this informal series, and I will be looking forward to new content.

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서로 좋아 죽는 바보 - The fools that die because they love each other

I can't pretend to fully understand what is actually going on here (love that). There are mysteries, there are questions, and there are connections that I can't quite make yet. Once again, the atmosphere was great and I liked how you built the dread progressively and just never stopped. I also really liked a lot of the wording chosen and the language used in general, might steal some of it for myself lol. Everything really comes together in service of the #themes. So yeah, safe to say, I'll be awaiting whatever comes next. +1

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