The Backrooms

is that a reference to hit song- (dies)

anyway, phenomenal writing

I like this expansion. It gives a lot of life to an article I didn’t really liked.

while i liked the idea of this monologue between the dead overseers, i felt like the reveal was used more as a dramatic twist than a development from the already shaky over expository pathos that our protag gives. coupled with a slightly generic opening half, and i really think the tale could have a more novel and thoughtful commentary with the right prodding

Creative story, nice name. I liked this very much.