The Backrooms

Okay, good. I'll be honest since we're friends. That was very well written and I loved the details, I felt sorry for the kid. I thought he eventually manage to find it and take it away, but don't forget how fuckingly unfair the Backrooms are. The entities don't see anything and we don't even know if they are evil by nature or just struggling to survive.

Now, I may be wrong, because my brain works in a different way, but I think it could have shown more, because you hooked me with this wonder and I was left with the doubt. (like I said, my mind works differently, but I loved the tale).

You are giving me a little inspiration with what you wrote, since lately I am in a massive block and therefore, I cannot finish the level that I have been thinking about writing for so long (3 damn years, with this one it will be 4).

But yeah, seriously. Congratulations on your first tale.

:)

I agree with Rhauniel on more could have been shown. But this is the type of despair I absolutely enjoy, as it really has you praying for the child because there is nothing we can do but watch (or well, read on, so good for you on that lol) but yeah I would enjoy seeing more of that "despair" section where we know the kid is absolutely screwed over and that there is nothing we can do except watch on. Nonetheless +1 (I SWEAR I'M NOT A SADIST IT'S ALL WRITING IT'S ALLLL WRITING I say as I get shown my OCs and their unnecessary suffering)

Dr.Akimoto,

I hope this finds you and yours well. You told your tale with your vision. It is neither too long or too short.

+1 from the Goerman. Thank you!

Well, what did we learn from this experience? DON'T GO ALONE IN SEARCH FOR LOST PEOPLE IN THE BACKROOMS. I thought he would find the kid, dang well, tough luck.