FIRST
I can't believe I'm the first but like I do, I'll give my feedback.
So this is a pretty good article. The opening rambles on for a while but it does do an efficient job at setting a scene and tone. I wish I knew why the Ottava Lamps does what they do, but given the theme of "we haven't conquered the Backrooms", it does make sense to not go deeper in depth. The concept isn't my favorite but the excellent plot, style, theme, and tone more than make up for it.
6/10 Concept; 9/10 Execution
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