The Backrooms

I enjoyed reading this.
Many beds with ocean, this give me some mysterious comfort feeling.

First story made me emotional, second story made me surprised, and last story also made me sad.
I couldn't expect lying on the bed can be a wonderful story, but you made a wonderful thing!

I want to give you my glory about your work.
Good job, Derrick.
+1!

It's alright… Just fix the grammar in some sentences.

No rate for now.

interesting concept bogged down by unnatural dialogue.

-1

The idea that makes level exist is not such a good idea. It's so simple and nothing does it "special".

The problem is reader can't feel empathy that makes them say "I'm feeling like I'm in the level right now.". To solve this, i reckon you write a story that the character is reader and talking style is "you woke up; you started to walk on golden, hot sands" etc. at the end. And most important: add depth in your story parts, they try to tell you emotional a mini-story but unfortunately it's fail at there.

So I'm not rating it for now, because it's not worthy to get +1 but it's not bad such as an article that really bad at the same time.