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Can't find about the Entity 38|Watchers, it's rewriting or something?
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i think the article got deleted but i found this tts reading of it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRO5bkvTKV4
BiohazardMon
Whilst I tried to get through this article and see the ideas it had to present, I had a hard time trying to do it. This is mainly because there are so many different types of strait up grammatical errors. Also a good bit of the wording seemed to b e repetitive and blocky.
I think that this article could be quite cool and interesting with its ideas if it didn’t have all the errors. A full paragraph rewrite correct many of the errors could almost definitely improve the quality of this material.
dull as hell.
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I like the idea of an aquarium, and the flavor is okay, but it’s missing something. Maybe more information on how the major set pieces of the level are experienced with the other senses, as well as some info on what the fish monster looks like.
I also recommend using distance instead of time to explain how far apart the various sections are (Unless the transitions ARE based on time rather than distance, in which case the article should say so)
The age does show on this one I will admit, the SPaG is definitely not up to snuff. however the concept and execution are excellent. The way the environment gets more fucked up and weird the further you go eventually culminating to what basically seems like the building turning into a boss fight arena for the evil fish thing and other entities to attack you in. It's a concept that might seem a little bland on the surface but actually reading it is pretty fun and attention grabbing, the details also make it pretty easy for me to picture this level and what it would be like which not every level nowadays can do.
+1, I definitely want more levels like this one.
yoink_
Interesting concept. Mediocre execution.
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