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Comments for page "Phenomenon 44 - "Spontaneous Human Combustion"" https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672/phenomenon-44-spontaneous-human-combustion Posts in the discussion thread "Phenomenon 44 - "Spontaneous Human Combustion"" Sat, 11 Jul 2026 14:35:06 +0000 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672#post-7583530 Re: -1 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672/phenomenon-44-spontaneous-human-combustion#post-7583530 Thu, 05 Mar 2026 04:14:11 +0000 doctrinator 7753771 thanks for the feedback! i completely get where you're coming from- the first draft of this had no addendum n i did just add it for the sake of characterizing jean meier. i totally understand how it could take away from the main part

]]> https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672#post-7583519 -1 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672/phenomenon-44-spontaneous-human-combustion#post-7583519 Thu, 05 Mar 2026 03:43:05 +0000 Wynths 9594206 while technically proficient, i really felt like this could have benefitted from cutting the addendum and focusing on the intense image of a liminal man bein killed from the inside, the fire a visualization of disassociation. it felt like the addendum was just there to make sure people got the idea, which i felt sacrificed a lot of poignancy

]]> https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672#post-7580346 Re: +1 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672/phenomenon-44-spontaneous-human-combustion#post-7580346 Tue, 03 Mar 2026 17:28:14 +0000 doctrinator 7753771 thank you!!

]]> https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672#post-7580012 +1 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672/phenomenon-44-spontaneous-human-combustion#post-7580012 Tue, 03 Mar 2026 14:33:53 +0000 bob125478 10227279 Loved this :>

]]> https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672#post-7578992 author post https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-17599672/phenomenon-44-spontaneous-human-combustion#post-7578992 Mon, 02 Mar 2026 23:37:50 +0000 doctrinator 7753771

And when I wake up today, there's a white ceiling
And when I wake up yesterday, there's a white ceiling
And when I wake up tomorrow, there's a white ceiling
And when I wake up everyday, there's a white ceiling
Always, always, always

sometimes i worry that i'm not fighting hard enough to live

thank you to DivineAtlasDivineAtlas for the greenlight and CamaradeAlbabarCamaradeAlbabar for something

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