I might comment later.
]]>We both should really be asleep now, anyway.
]]>I did have a couple issues with some of the language and prose, but I'm just being a hater I enjoyed it so you get a +1
]]>Also, it says that Olivia didn't even go that far from the grave, partly because of instinct telling her to eat the body. She didn't even really go out looking for alternative food sources, and that instinct could have told her to follow my idea. I still think it would make more sense to go that way, sorry.
]]>this guy is implied to be a father figure to her. The reason she didn't take him to eat is because she didn't want to eat him. She buried him out of respect the way you do and then ran out of food and had to return to the grave or starve
One thing that's important to note is that this is a person focused tale. These aren't experts or survivalists, these are just two ordinary people thrown into a very unordinary world.
As for the clothes. He is dead, he does not need clothes. I also hoped the father figure thing would imply he'd want her to take his clothes. Taking the clothes of the dead and eating the body of the dead are two hugely different things. It is not just cannibalism but the added layer of this being someone she loves. The cold preserved his body so physically he looks as he did when he died.
Hope that helps.
]]>I get that she's disgusted by what she's doing to the body, but surely she should keep the only food source around with her? She seems to be entirely focused on her own survival now. She also doesn't seem to show any regret for stealing the clothes the man was wearing.
Is there context I'm missing from something else here?
]]>Shows very well that aspect of post-apocalyptic survival of the Backrooms where respect, love or humanity are strapped away for survival. The parts are touching or disgusting when they need to be. Great one!
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