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Comments for page "Object 37 - "Star Candy"" https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy Posts in the discussion thread "Object 37 - "Star Candy"" Sat, 11 Jul 2026 18:30:05 +0000 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-7722816 Re: I look forward to when it is rewrite. https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-7722816 Thu, 02 Apr 2026 01:11:22 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 I edited some stuff, and I hope it is written better now! :)

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-7707533 Re: -1 in 2025 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-7707533 Tue, 31 Mar 2026 00:29:49 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 Yeah, I wrote this a while ago. I'm planning on rewriting it.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-7018083 I look forward to when it is rewrite. https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-7018083 Fri, 30 May 2025 06:24:57 +0000 Emzy-chan 8416406 Hm, I hope the article is rewritten soon and the potential for further development is also very potential if it can get more attention!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6925215 -1 in 2025 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6925215 Wed, 16 Apr 2025 17:16:30 +0000 SquibbleZombie 9534996 So this article doesn't do anything unique (as the previous comment illustrated. It can be boiled down to "Candy that can be melted into a drink". All other effects are incredibly minor and not expanded upon. Here's stuff that your article is unoriginal in:
1. Object that heals slightly (Almond Water; Greasy Marshmallows; Royal Rations; Lucky O' Milk)
2. Object that can be melted down into a drink (Greasy Marshmallow; Ultimate Backrooms Cookbook)
3. Candy (Candy; Umi's Sweets; Chocobytes; Dumb Gum; Greasy Marshmallows)
4. Different varieties of food (Almond Water; Lucky O' Milk; Candy; Umi's Sweets)

It isn't bad, your article will never be completely unique, but the few concepts you bring up are used in so many other places.

If I were to give you a suggestion on how to quickly improve your article, I'd suggest moving it down to a later slot, like Object 79. Your article is surrounded by amazing articles or articles with a similar style, so putting it farther down could differentiate it in context. This, of course, would need to be done by an admin.

The best way to make your article better is just rewriting it. Give us something fresh. Until then, for all the unoriginalness and lackluster writing, I give this a -1.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6598597 Re: Feels unoriginal https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6598597 Mon, 12 Aug 2024 15:02:11 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 You have? I haven't seen any;;

Maybe I'll rewrite this someday

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6463591 Feels unoriginal https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6463591 Sat, 23 Mar 2024 06:02:54 +0000 Crumbzee 9059518 The ideas making up this object I’ve seen before in other pages.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6240385 Re: This should won https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6240385 Mon, 06 Nov 2023 01:25:35 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 Thanks! :)

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6239284 Re: This should won https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6239284 Sat, 04 Nov 2023 19:04:14 +0000 UltimateSword 8759117 (among the classicon)

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6239283 This should won https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6239283 Sat, 04 Nov 2023 19:03:51 +0000 UltimateSword 8759117 This is the most basic and classic one out of all. I am voting to this.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6232380 Re: +1, however: https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6232380 Fri, 27 Oct 2023 00:57:38 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 I'll try to work out some extra details!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6232149 +1, however: https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6232149 Thu, 26 Oct 2023 18:20:50 +0000 Spectre48 6247398 This entry is like cake without icing. Its good for what it is, but its missing that little extra bit of detail that could send it to the top. Solid concept, definitely embodies the feel of classicon, its nothing special, but it doesn't have to be. Overall I give it a "B"

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6231591 (no title) https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6231591 Thu, 26 Oct 2023 03:01:05 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 Whoops, almost forgot :0

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6231565 Re: I don't hate it, but... https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6231565 Thu, 26 Oct 2023 02:26:59 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 Thanks for the advice, I'll try to work more on this!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6231456 (no title) https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6231456 Wed, 25 Oct 2023 23:28:23 +0000 MaskedTale41 8233352 Make sure to include your license box.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6231301 I don't hate it, but... https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6231301 Wed, 25 Oct 2023 16:12:18 +0000 CamaradeAlbabar 4454996 Yeah so you just made drugs in the Backrooms a thing, right? /lh

More seriously, I think the "addictive" aspect of your object is interesting and could have been further developed. I think the idea of an object which would be useful in small doses but dangerous in higher doses really fits the survival aspect of the Backrooms! Another small gripe is the "calming effect" the object gives, which seems unnecessary in my eyes. Maybe it should be an effect when consumed, furthering the risk of addiction, as wanderers may want to use it while under stress.

It is a novote for me, but it could develop into an upvote if slightly reworked.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6230350 (no title) https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6230350 Tue, 24 Oct 2023 12:44:38 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 I also realized that just before reading this comment :0
Have to admit that it was a bit rushed.
Since the rules say that people are allowed to edit their posts after posting them, I'll try to change that up a bit soon.
Thanks for your help!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6230345 Re: -1, too lackluster (even for a classic page) https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6230345 Tue, 24 Oct 2023 12:40:02 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 I'll keep that in mind.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6230291 -1, too lackluster (even for a classic page) https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6230291 Tue, 24 Oct 2023 10:28:12 +0000 Praetor3005 8321734 Something I don't like with most classic 2020 pages is how they present elements they don't use. Here, almost everything you present is underused: the addiction aspect, the colors, the drink, the classified information part… which makes the overall page feel like a wasted opportunity, despite its potential as an interesting lore element. Downvote for now, but I think a rewrite with proper expansion of each part to make everything both useful and interesting for the overall universe.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6230290 (no title) https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6230290 Tue, 24 Oct 2023 10:27:19 +0000 MaskedTale41 8233352 All I've got to say is that the "classified information" bit isn't necessary and somewhat disappoints the reader to find that they can't see such "classified information". It may be better to find a different closure to your article. Plus, for there to be an access denied, it would mean someone had to put it there, implying there was a group who wrote and placed your article in the database. So while not directly stated or mention, you tie your article to a group.
To quote the contest page, "The involvement of major groups (such as the M.E.G. or the B.N.T.G.) in your article is discouraged."
Plus, you bring up several interesting details, and then don't dive into them. I really don't like that as a reader, with any article.
-1
I wish I could help you more, but I don't know why other people downvoted because I'm not a mind reader.
Byyyyyyyeeeee
~ Pen
P.S. Also, check your PMs. I sent you three different ones(possibly four) and haven't gotten a single reply.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6230258 Re: STAR https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6230258 Tue, 24 Oct 2023 09:20:41 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 Thanks! :D

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6230131 STAR https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6230131 Tue, 24 Oct 2023 04:19:47 +0000 IsaacIsa 7942577 STAR STAR STAR STAR

And also I'm a fan of the page, good job!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229987 Re: Reads Like an Original https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229987 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 22:23:37 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 I hope so too!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229985 Re: +1 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229985 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 22:23:14 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 I'm sure it would be refreshing :)

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229871 Reads Like an Original https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229871 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 17:13:41 +0000 Robert Goerman 6447777 Okay, to be honest, this reads like it was written in the "good old days," from the very beginnings of the Backrooms. It is short and sweet, pun intended. The score does NOT do it justice. Hope it avoids deletion and becomes a thing!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229796 +1 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229796 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 14:41:39 +0000 CharaTheArchivist 8330689 This just gives off that strong, classic Backrooms feeling. Also, I would totally like to have an IRL equivalent to the Star Juice because it sounds quite refreshing.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229640 Re: First +1 in Classicon https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229640 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 11:21:51 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 Thanks!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229636 First +1 in Classicon https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229636 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 11:18:58 +0000 aster_argyle 8472464 Cheer up cheer up!
I upvote this, since I thougt this really fit with classicon!

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229590 Re: +1 from Goerman https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229590 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 09:47:03 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 Thanks lol :)

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229560 +1 from Goerman https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229560 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 08:58:12 +0000 Robert Goerman 6447777 Very CLASSIC.

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229405 Re: Classic Page for Classicon https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229405 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 01:08:12 +0000 Pearbranch 7962133 Thanks :)

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https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686#post-6229392 Classic Page for Classicon https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16414686/object-37-star-candy#post-6229392 Mon, 23 Oct 2023 00:27:06 +0000 Derrick770 8372583 What can I say, this certainly is a classic looking page. +1

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