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]]>Rereading it diligently now… holy shit. +1
The truth behind the entity really makes this article.
]]>+1. The concept of an entity like THAT is incredible.
]]>The concept here is actually quite enticing. It is somewhat formulaic of weird scary thing that has a meta bit of posting it on the database, but still generally entertaining and spooky. My favorite part was the “bleeding out leaves” bit.
The execution here, as I said is somewhat formulaic, but not to the point of being boring or cliche. It’s kinda the same format as level 16, for example. The show not tell approach here was really enjoyable and I like how you left a lot of things up to reader interpretation, something that isn’t done nearly often enough. It was genuinely entertaining and enticing as well. I agree with Argon and Rika of it not being WOW AMAZING but still pretty stinking good.
Yes, quite a lot.
I throughly enjoyed the concept and execution of this article. I’m looking forward to seeing more from you! +1
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