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WHAT IS THE SMILING ROOM????? There was never ANY page for this Level, it has never existed, not even a link to it exists so i have no idea why this is still listed.
Honestly i'm glad this is getting a rewrite.
needs a rewrite
]]>If I'm being honest, it survived longer than I thought it would. Which yeah it's under rewrite so I would'nt expect it to be deleted off the site yet, but still though
]]>First, there are alot of SPaG's in this level! A concept for extra rewrite IS necessary! Feels boring and some things doesn't even feel interesting! here's my rating:
SPaG: 4/10: has grammar issues
Concept: 1/10: whoever greenlit this deserves a down grade!
interest: 0/10: Really needs a rewrite, there could've been a better idea's for example for one of the sentences: "Watch out, as you may accidentally fall into the water and into Level 289." instead it could've been: "If you find a deep puddle, never go down the depth or you will end up in level 289!"
paragraph length: 1/10, really seems rushed, should've been thought carefully!
2/10: Rewrite is recommended!
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Later in Entrances and Exits, again, you say (and I quote) that you can swim down into the water and end up in either Level 7 or Level -2.
What's the deal with Level 7?
Needs rewrite.
]]>I saw that the author said that level 34 will be rewritten, I'm looking forward to seeing it there.
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