Level 95 - "The Backrooms Country Club"

This is my first page so I thought I would make something pretty simple. Just a golf themed level I made, some critique would be much appreciated. Had this idea a few years ago when I first joined wikidot, so I searched for a similar concept but was astounded to find that the backrooms wikidot doesn't have a golf course themed level. I've rewritten it 3 times, so I hope this is sufficient enough to be posted.

http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/maximus-theodore-the-backrooms-country-club

I'll post the sub-layer after I'm finished making it, until then enjoy the mystery of what happens when you "become a member". Please let me know if I've made a mistake regarding formatting or embarrassing grammar,

Happy Reading!