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Article Title: Level 695 - "Shrouded Spur"
Word Count: 2800 (estimated reading time ~10-15 minutes)
Roughly evenly split between level descriptions and narrative
Brief Description: Level 695 (Survival Class 1) appears as an infinite plane of parallel multi-lane asphalt roads, each separated by strips of grass and trees. Strange, blurred vehicles pass by on the roads. The level exists in a perpetual state of twilight, and the air is filled with a thick mist. Occasionally, rain will pour from the sky; this rain is made from Almond Water, and as such this level serves as a renewable source of the Object. Several communities and Groups Of Interest have established a permanent presence on the level, most of which regularly interact with each other.
Critique Focus: Looking for any and all feedback for a greenlight/clear! The last section has a little twist which I'm hoping to connect to a future Tale I want to write about the level, but let me know if it feels weird or out of place.
Additional Notes/Remarks: This is the second draft of my first ever page!! The original draft was pretty rough, but I've done a lot of reworking over the past few weeks, and I'm feeling much better about it overall.