Level 0 - "Threshold" / Discussion

Well done soldier

Yellow Hell was Tutorial Level
Now it’s Yellow Hell, not Tutorial Level
Been a long time gone, Tutorial Level

was this page's 2nd greenlight !!
it actually made me like clinical tone even if just for a moment so you know it's good

didn't crit this, but I did read it during crit, and I quite liked it. I think it does a great job of maintaining the reader's attention without resorting to some character arc, and I really like the concise way that this level 0 entry expands on the common conceptions of level 0 in a natural way. good work!

I was also present for the critting process!

There are still some parts I don't like, such as the flowery language, but I understand that not everyone is gonna get what they want out of a Level 0 rewrite. Overall, this is the best we can ask for.

I GET TO BE LUCKY UPVOTE NUMBER THIRTEEN!

My deepest gratitude to DivineAtlas & DrAkimoto.

And, to the entire community.

Friends and colleagues FOREVER.

Amazing, absolute cinema. It's not boring anymore ♪(´▽｀)

Finally, it's here. I will miss the old article, but let's cheer for the new Level 0 now

When I review the article, it hasn't been completely changed, as is often the case with rewrites. It's been slightly improved, with more entries added and more explanations provided, which I like.

In my opinion, the title level should not be touched. Threshold sounds… Normal? Modern. Not cool?

+1

Hell yes, good stuff. Glad I could be the page's 4th greenlight.

Great page — glad I got to be involved in the initial critique process of it and be the first to greenlight it. Out of all the renditions of Level 0, only this and one other have been executed to my satisfaction. Good job Atlas and co.