Object 54 / Discussion

Hope you enjoy the absurdism.

Oh yeah the prompt used is: "Survivor".

If this doesn’t get top 3 I will literally throw bricks at every community member that novoted

The idea of remembrance strikes the Backrooms once again! The way you portrayed yelling and screaming is unbelievably good.
But…
Object 54, amirite?

(Also, I found 3 missing letters, do they even mean anything? Or are they just grammatical errors?)

Ignoring the grammatical errors and minuet things that could be improved, this is incredible. Truly amazing job here. This deserves to make top 3

I was quite confused as to what was happening in this page, but I think that was the intention. I found the narrative quite engaging and it is quite a unique concept. Good work

Holy shit.

I love philosophy and paradoxes. Take my upvote.

Okay, so I loved the themes and topics you put in this page. Paradoxes, and second deaths, I absolutely loved how you melded the two of them together.

With that said, I do think there are points in this piece you could have cut. There were sections that, while interesting, didn't add much to the piece overall. They weren't bad either, but I don't think they fit very well. If you cut them, it would tighten the piece and made the overall themes pop out a bit more and be a bit more cohesive.

Overall, very nice though.

I am NOT a fan of the style. AT ALL.

But…

bro's on to something X
bro's on something √