Well, I finally did it! I had to struggle through a lot of things as I was making this, but here it is. I know I already said this in the credits, but thanks to those who supported me as I wrote this. Tell me what you think.
PenOrSaber1
I love it so much I am doing the "Happy Dance."
Very solid.
Looks like Liminal Echo is hard at work here!
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
i also have a question.
does "we must tear down this wall" reference the speech made by Ronald Regean about the berlin wall? does it also reference the one made by JFK?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ich_bin_ein_Berliner
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tear_down_this_wall!
Edit: I realized i replied to the wrong comment, i meant to reply on the one below this one
hi it is me aaron92
I think you mean Ronald Reagan. To qoute the article in the link you sent me, "The Berlin Wall Speech was delivered by United States President Ronald Reagan in West Berlin on June 12, 1987."
I'm pretty sure I mentioned where all the speeche refrences came from in my article. If I did not, please say so.
Edit: I primarily meant Reagan's speech, but interpret it as you like. The edited qoute came from Reagan's speech, not Kennedy's, if that's what you are asking.
ok i found the part where it says that it was ronald reagan speaking. i thought that the credits for the speeches came from footnotes.
hi it is me aaron92
Nope. That's only for the poem. Because the last offset was structured as a message instead of an explanation/evidence/elaboration, I had to include it in a footnote(btw, it's now subscript in the offset)
I pointed out the source of the altered qoutes in the elaboration itself.
pen your page is good
mine will be published soon
+1
hi it is me aaron92
Good luck to you with your page.
And thank you for the plus 1 and compliment.
I like how interesting the whole thing is and how it draws you in. Definitely a +1 from me.
Crazy? I was Crazy once… they locked me in a room… a rubber room… a rubber room with rats and rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was Crazy once… they locked me in a room… a rubber room… a rubber room with rats… and rats make me crazy. Crazy? I was Crazy once… they locked me in a room… a Backroom… and Backrooms make me crazy. Crazy? I was Crazy once…
I tried my best to make it as interesting as possible when writing it. Thank you.
Intriguing article. Would love to see more of this concept!
I do like to know what's up with this war thing, but I suppose the lack of details is intentional on your part.
One particular detail I like is that one sentence near the end of the article. Specifically the crossing out of "rapid" and it being replaced with "slight." Subtle.
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I needed an overall concept for the messages, and I thought of the one thing that may cause a major disturbance in the backrooms. So I told myself, "Weeelll…Why not make the messages about war? I'm sure that if M.E.G. heard there was a possibilty of an approaching war, then that would cause some disturbance and make this phenomena more important than if it was anything else."
And yes, I can be very sneaky when I want to be. The number for the phenomena is another example of that…
Could you please give me some feedback so I can improve my article? I can't make it better after the contest if I don't know why you believe it is bad.
Note: This is just me personally. Main grip I have with this article is that it does a lot of telling.
Why weren't these messages heard in the Backrooms during the years they were made? Why are they altered? Who is transmitting them, if anyone?
I know you said that the Backrooms might be on a different timeline than the frontrooms, but how would these radio waves reach us even then? If it were possible for radio waves to reach the frontrooms, we would try communicating with them. How would our radios recieve these messages?
Could it be that these are disembodied voices trying to talk to us? Based on some of the contradicting messages, there might be two beings fighting for control. Are they on our side? Are they entities or people from the future?
Just a lot of this within a short period of time, so much that it becomes a block of text to skim through. It could be better to cut down on the questions? Sometimes the unsaid speaks volumes.
Rather than asking many questions in succession, it could benefit from allowing the reader more space to think about the implications of the ideas presented themselves. As of now, it doesn't leave much room for readers to engage mentally.
Hope this helps!
These are not bonafide Frontrooms radio messages as we understand them.
Sounds like Liminal Echo hard at work.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Better? I got rid of most of the questions. If you see anything else, please point it out. I didn't get rid of all of them because I want to give the reader a little push in the right direction.
I also fixed the broken List User Module.
I'll most likely re-edit it based of feedback to make it better after the contest, if it doesn't get deleted. I'm just going to do slight edits for now.
It might just be me, but the hitboxes for collapsibles and tabs were very skewed
Update: Yeah it was just me.
https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16162462/creation-of-temporal-canon
Back on 28 Jul 2023, PenOrSaber1 wrote, "As the author of Phenomena 19, if you want to include it in your canon, I am completely fine with it. If you want, I will expand on it and further contribute to this canon."
Of course, the "Temporal Canon" evolved into the Multiverse Canon. Unable to reach the author, can we include RWP into our Multiverse Canon?
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman