yet again, captain's crew related rewrite! the flyin' sharks are back, mateys. thank you to
noah rabe and
SecondtoInfinity for the super helpful crit!
as always, if you're interested in upcoming plans for the captain's crew, there's a GOI discord! feel free to dm me for the link :)
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captaiin
i've got that friday night fever, sometimes a man just needs a breather
masterpiece. +1 for funny fish
EXACTLY. thank you for your support of funny fish
i've got that friday night fever, sometimes a man just needs a breather
Sometimes, simpler ideas are where it's at. Volares aren't really an outstanding concept, yet that aspect doesn't go against them; instead, it makes for interesting, straightforward gimmicks. Flying thief sharks that mildly act like parrots? I'm all in for that, hell yeah.
Good job on the rewrite, Captaiin. +1 From me.
There are a lot of things this article does well (even before my crits were implemented.) For instance, I'm glad it doesn't fall into being too long but still has enough substance for readers to enjoy. The Logbook was awesome (the font was a nice touch too!) It has the added benefit of not being too complex so readers who like more simplistic reads can enjoy stuff too. Not much more I can say, amazing job fr fr!!
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked, and I totally agree! I love to lean into the simple pleasures of writing and reading :)
i've got that friday night fever, sometimes a man just needs a breather
I am quite glad to see these silly fish finally return to being real. I've been missing them ever since they first disappeared!
Now they are back, and with a fresh new article to boot! You did a very good job here.
Also thanks for the shoutout, I appreciate it.
no way its mudkip
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