Divvvvy,
You are indeed first.
THANK YOU for the upvote!
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
(account deleted)
hi it is me aaron92
Aaron92,
THANK YOU for the upvote!
Nothing like a little "Happy Dance" before bursting.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Spectre48,
THANK YOU for the upvote!
I am glad that you "liked it."
Your existential dread fills me with existential guilt.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
I liked the body horror aspect, very well done Mr. Goerman! I was looking forward to it.
Nikuchan,
THANK YOU for the upvote.
So glad that I scared you a lot.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
nice, good, funny title, definitely didn't scare me. +1
dom dumb,
THANK YOU for the upvote!
I am so glad that you were not scared.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
holy cow what.
I love body horror, so take a +1, please!
(this page genuinely scared me!!!!)
I exist for the sole purpose of writing this
Iamalemon,
What body horror? Where? Where?
THANK YOU very much.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
I definitely wasn't spying on your progress on this while it was in the sandbox XD. Anyway, it's really good, and I like it. +1
PenOrSaber1,
Isn't it weird how I get spurts of creativity.
THANK YOU for the upvote, my friend and colleague.
Let's just see where this little phenomenon goes…
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Not very weird. I woke up this morning, looked at my desk, randomly thought of a particular part of Ronald Dahl's Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, and came up with a level idea.
I'm sure your phenomena will make it very far(wonder if Broogli will start covering phenomenas).
Oh yeah, I have a link to some of my finished sandbox drafts here(one of which has been waiting a month for critique for) if you want to take a peek: http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15684961/just-a-lot-of-drafts#post-5990965
PenOrSaber1,
I am genuinely sorry for not getting back to you about Phenomenon X: (Radio Waves of the Past). I just got really excited about posting my first Phenomenon!
Funny how an experienced author of many decades can still get excited over his work.
(Radio Waves of the Past) has amazing potential to be the launch platform for many a wonderful tale and plot twist. Is this a parallel reality? Are beings from the future conducting psychological warfare and special ops? Why would intelligent beings from the future think that more humans in the Backrooms = the upset of the balance of the multiverse.
I think Phenomenon 3 is a bit too gruesome for YouTube.
All my best,
Robert
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Thank you! It's alright(probably should have pm'd you the link instead, but oh, well). Anyway, your phenomena is going to be successful as your other works, and you have the right to be excited.
I(if it is okay with you) could easily connect my phenomena to yours, due to this statement:
Wilder theories wonder if someone or something from the future is conducting biological warfare. They speculate, without evidence, that the influx of humans into the Backrooms is "upsetting the balance of the multiverse."
Can we continue this conversation via pm?
By the way, happy (early) birthday!
Deip*isoster,
THANK YOU, my friend and colleague, for your support!
We truly appreciate it.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
This one's a banger, gotta admit! Honestly you've got a REALLY strong hook btw, like there's no whiplash bigger than seeing "Happy Dance Disease" followed by "Also known as Exploding Wanderer Syndrome" lol. Got hooked as soon as I read that. Good job!
NWVoyager,
THANK YOU so very much for the +1.
I will be 71 years old in a few days and have been writing for 5 decades.
"Hooks" are my specialty.
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Maybe you will like something else…
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Wow. I got shivers reading this. Excellent work yet again, Mr. Goerman. Hope I never have to dance like that, ever.
TrailmixNCocoa,
"Shivers" are my other specialty.
THANK YOU for the +1.
We keep trying (like all the authors here) to develop interesting new scenarios.
"Happy Dance / EWS" was written in the Entity 123 horror zone.
Just wanted to prove to Lemon A.K.A. Henry that this old man could still concoct a spooky story or two. I believe they turned out as intended.
Looking forward to more from you and the rest of our "gang."
Partygoerman =)
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman