Blanche’s Halloween Party / Discussion

I’m posting this on my birthday so you all better read, lest you disappoint the birthday boy. Anyways, here’s me late to the party as usual, but still making it in the nick of time with “Blanche’s Halloween Party”! Finally, I got to write a tale about Blanche. Tom was very fun to write, and I appreciate Snom giving me his idea since he was unable to write it. Thanks to everyone who let me use their characters (credited in the author tab), and also thanks to TrailmixNCocoa for full Crit and SnomWriting for additional concept Crit and Blanche stuff. I hope you enjoy my spookycon entry, and of course,

So glad to be able to read this early on, and honored to be the one to critique it. You've done very well with this tale! Happy Birthday!! +1

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Berry wasn't dressed up in a snom costume.

+1 (On a serious note best read i've had in a while)

A few SPaG mistakes here and there but nothing that didn't make this fun to read through.

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