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(account deleted)so ducks which can manipulate the minds of anyone who comes into contact with them?
it's pretty cute, and the premise is decent. i do feel like the dialogue felt choppy at certain points, but it's a genuinely cute premise with a nice twist to carry it.
^^ this is 100% how i feel too
- random bitch on wikidot
When I started reading this, I thought it was just another poorly written entry. That twist totally caught me off guard. Just…wow. +1
Had to scrape my jaw up off the floor with that ending, that was an incredible twist! +1 for that incredible diversion of expectations, very creative and horrifyingly cute.
"I highly advise you don't touch the hallucinations, otherwise they become real and that's a problem we don't need to deal with. There's still one that's lingering in the break room, I'm thinking of hiring her onto the team if she continues to stay there. After all, she does express quite the interest in my work…"
+1
me at the beginning: how boring
me in the end: :0
So basically… you're all screwed when you see these ducks… Nice
+1
Disclaimer: please don't feed ducks bread it's bad for them 🧍
it’s the same for most birds, the bread expands in their stomachs or gets built up on the beak and their stomach gets problematic (usually doesn’t explode, if your mother would say this it’s only like a 1/200 chance tbh) and their beak gets “glued” shut.
Oh no I committed Duckslaughter as a child
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oh nooo :( well there’s only a small chance that it actually killed it so hopefully you didn’t commit duckslaughter <3
Oh thank you for telling me that I would’ve been dead to the grave if I had actually.
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Shit.
From Pyro AroAce, that one trans guy.
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